“so I started obeying a little.  I’d feel God wanting me to h0ld my tongue, and I would do it.  it didn’t feel natural at first; it felt fake, like I was being a character somebody else wanted me to be and not who I actually was; but if I held my tongue, the scene would play better, and I always felt better when it was done.  I started feeling like a better character, and when you are a better character, your story gets better too.”

advice for me from dm.  maybe he heard about me being a character person.